COPE Writing Short Introduction

Bazi ogrenciler uzun bir introductionun iyi bir fikir oldugunu dusunuyor. Ama ben kisa ve oz bir introductionu oneriyorum. Hadi biraz karsilastiralim.

Kisa introduction
People have different views about how best to improve transportation in cities. While better provision for cyclists would be a positive measure, I would argue that further investment in public transport should be the priority in most cities.

Ogrencinin yazdigi uzun introduction
Nowadays, there is a large debate around the ideal transportation means that should be promoted by governments. Some believe that means like bicycles should be supported, while others feel that spending should be directed toward public transportations. I think that both means have to be subsidized because each has advantages and potential disadvantages. In this essay, I shall discuss and analyze both views.

Analiz
Asagidaki uzun olan goruldugu gibi biraz kendini tekrar ediyor, ama onun disinda iyi gozukuyor, Asil problem zaman harcamak eger siz introductiona 3 yerine 5 cumle yazarsaniz  bu sizin yuksek puan almanizin anahtari olan main  paragraph icin ayirmaniz gereken sureden gidecektir. Uzun introduction tam anlamiyla puan artirmaniza yardimci olmaz ancak uzun ve daha iyi bir main paragraph artiracaktir.